On thursday' class time, Professor Mangini sat with me to discuss my hiraeth project that I had turned in early for review. I was very confident with this draft and wasn't sure what feedback I would receive because I wasn't sure what else could be done to fix it, honestly. However, i am glad he found things that I can work on to revise it. Such as, fixing up my imagery and cleaning my thoughts up a bit more. It is always much more helpful when someone else reads your work. Especially, when they have a degree in that field! I like to take advantage of opportunities like that when they are offered! Once I take his feedback and begin draft number 3, I will be working or my argument based project and turn that in for review as well!
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Sabatino
4/26/2017 07:49:04 am
Sounds like a productive process! And glad to hear our talk proved helpful.
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