Here I am, sitting in class, making changes to my hiraeth that I feel is necessary to improve it. Just about to hand in my movie argument. As he, my teacher, is talking about the paper more, I am noticing changes already that I could be making on my paper. One being, to cite my sources better. Give proper credit as well as keeping in mind the give back of an argument to be more persuasive, seeing the other side of the argument. I seemed to do that in the beginning, but re writing it, I switched over to more, my side of the argument, seeing proper sources that agree with where my mindset is on this particular topic. These sources don't show the other side of the argument, but that doesn't mean that I shouldn't. It might help my argument make more sense, and why I see my point of view the way that I do.
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