After discussing with my professor about which drafts I wanted to work on, I couldn't decide. I thought the film-based argument was too strong of a controversy to touch on even more so I chose the mindset argument which was a lot harder to write, personally. He kinda persuaded me to lead towards the film-based argument because it was very powerful. He recommended that if I couldn't decide which one to go with, along with the hiraeth project, that I would write a second draft for both of these topics.
Trying to analyze my mindset argument again, was a lot more difficult the second time around. Looking at it again, to see, where it would need a touch up. Not because it is well written, but because I didn't know what else to add to make it sound more interesting. I thought about doing a draft on the film-based argument, and it felt like I had a lot more to say and more researched points that I can add onto it. I can shape up my points to be more argumentative without neglecting the other side of the argument and the facts they include as well. I may continue to do both drafts anyway if I get a brainstorm of ideas. However, I'm going to start with the film-based one first before I jump to the mindset one and still have writers block the day before its due.
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