Over the course of this week, I decided to write another draft for my hiraeth project. After reading it, over and over again, I saw that I really liked what I had written in terms of imagery. I needed to do more about my home that I can't return to, rather than focusing it on my grand father. I wrote an entirely new scene that gave a better sense of my home away from home. The actual home itself. The room specifically, that is part of my hiraeth. it was more difficult to think of memories that he was in, other then the main one I could remember. I was around 7 or 8 years old when he passed away. I'm excited to see what changes can be made to the second draft of my hiraeth and how I can start to make changes to make a third one.
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